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Hello, this is an update to my undertale AU Terra supra which i have been attempting to make since 2016-2017.

I will post the roles each character takes then I will put the story after.

Frisk: the 9th human to fall, the named character

Chara: does not exist the narrator is the player themselves

Flowey: Star (Chara)

Toriel: Frisk

Sans: Semi

Papyrus: Impact

Undyne: Dephyrs / Doge

Alphys: Alphys

MTT: Mew

Asgore: Asriel

still working on it lol

Terra supra is an Undertale Au where monsters were able to create an successful counter attack to the humans and use their souls to lock them away under the mountain. eventually the monsters Great mages eventually fall down and the barrier weakens and humans fall through the barrier and onto the ground above. Chara the first human gets taken in by the kingdom and the monsters start to lose their fear of the humans until chara tells them about the aggressive warring states the humans are currently in underground. one night chara attempts to sacrifice themselves by adding their soul to the barriers magic pool but ends up shattering their soul in an flurry of magic and determination the flower that sprouts up from where their soul shattered soaks up the magic and soul remnants creating the universes flowey.

The Justice soul hearing about humans finding freedom finds his way out and enacts vengeance onto the monsters who locked his people under, Undyne the royal captain hunts the human down before she is slain by him, Mettaton follows suit becoming irreparable but still alive. The second in command Dephyrs and Doge successfully hunt down and acquire the soul of the human.

Toriel under stress after most humans that exit the mountains are hostile, eventually finds a newly fallen frisk which is entirely passive which was never truly seen before from an fallen human. Toriel goes into exile to protect this human and passes her knowledge of magic and the world to the growing child. eventually Toriel falls down and frisk takes up her mantle of the caretaker

Your human falls into the old ruins of an human settlement on the Ebott mountain range.


The areas.

Ancient fortress (ruins)


Snowdin (snowdin) :

Snowdin forests, Snowdin Mountains, Glacier town (snowdin town)


Glacier (waterfall) :

Glacier caverns (waterfall entrance) , underground springs (magority of waterfall) , Waterfall springs (the lower area of waterfall, dominated area)


Hotland Volcano (hotland) :

Caldera, Molten pillars


Volcanic Bastion (core)


Outer Ebbot city


inner Ebbot city (new home)


Ebbot fortress (castle)

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so i believe the Au i wanted to make most likely wont be used often and has been put behind due to my classes and other more interesting ideas I've had like rebooting Bloodmoon into its own thing so i have decided to post the story and areas of the Au and related images before i forget to.

Knight's approach

the Au takes place in a universe that the monsters were able to counter attack the humans charge and push the group down into the mountain and use their souls to create a barrier with monster magic, over time these monsters holding human souls had children (boss monsters) and since monsters age past early adult once they have had children the soul bearing monsters slowly passed weakening the barrier. one day a human falls through a small hole in the barrier and is found by young prince Asriel where the story follows much of undertale's story and diverges again when Chara instead attempts to strengthen the barrier herself and ends up shattering her heart in the process, the leftover soul shards were collected and in monster tradition were placed in something they loved that were the star flowers (flowers that glow in the dark) from the underground the determination not wanting to let the soul die slowly corrupt the ground creating Star (flowey replacement).

Starflower

the story mainly continues normally except that Asriel does not die and instead eventually takes the place of Asgore, over this time many humans have escaped the barrier, the monsters afraid kill the humans and collect the souls in order to refresh the barrier. when you escape you do not take the character of frisk and instead take the name you gave them.

upon waking up outside you stumble around eventually finding a familiar sight, a Star flower that instead of giving off light greets you to the world above before attempting to take your soul for itself you are saved by a gentle horned monster who only refers to herself as a Faun and takes you through the ruins of an ancient human castle. they teach you about fight mechanics and what to do if you get caught in a battle. eventually you attempt to flee and instead fight the Faun who reveals themselves to be Frisk grown up and unwilling to leave to let the monsters replenish the barrier. once past the castle you trek up the mountain range finding yourself on the snowy peaks of Snowdin where you meet sans... well he isnt all knowing and a bit less lazy instead he makes a joke about your face when you saw him, he leads you across the bridge and introduces you to an older skeleton under the name of Semi who pulls off the classic sans tricks such as going the opposite way of they place you will see him or breaking the fourth wall. the two skeletons talk about the guard and how dangerous they will be. you later get to see a taller skeleton yelling at a bunch of smaller skeletons in Armour about not fulfilling their duties as guards, this skeleton is Impact the papyrus replacement ans related to the skelebros like Semi.

Skeletons

Most things follow the same with Semi and Impact replacing sans an papyrus (you get to meet the bone brothers in the house).

Impact is the area boss for snowdin before you enter water fall an underground spring system. there you meet Dephyrs the Spirit Blade, a Hot headed goat lesbian that wields a small sword and an battleaxe that replaces Undyne who fell from a previous battle the goat blames herself for as she could not save the late royal guard leader. Dephyrs has a family with Doge (the cut character) who is french has a small kid. (in geno she gets her own undying fight, after her you fight an enraged and heartbroken Doge who tries to keep on fighting after she has fallen down melting like undyne in the neutral fight)

waterfall is mainly the same with the exception of Dephyrs being a bit more "on hand" than Undyne she ruthlessly hunts you down before you tire her out from chasing you too much

(for pacifist Impact "captures" you and you get to talk to her where she calms down)

the mad dummy replacement is what is left of mettaton who was struck down in his partial NEO form and desperately wants to be a star again (mad dummy and mettaton swap) eventually his battery runs out and you continue through the mountain range into the Caldera of a volcano with a futuristic building in the center( volcanic heat and thermal energy runs the kingdom) where you meet Mew the rectangular cousin of mettaton who stepped into the spotlight to keep the kingdom entertained, he was filming with a small crew looking for you, he chases you around the Caldera and into the Molten pillars (the hotland replacement) that is basically the same but are inhabited by fire and dragon type monsters.

you eventually reach the Volcanic Bastion known as the Core where you eventually fight Mew, where they become their EX form who is Mew Mew, She fights you until her battery runs out.

Mew

You end up in Ebbot city that rests over the mountain it was named from, you make your way through it and you are told by monsters of the story like undertale before you fight the king unless you kill all monsters up to here where you will fight sans and his brother Papyrus, its a combination of their attacks minus the time warping abilities sans had in undertale.

you then make your way to the castle and pass through the hall of fallen kings (a hall with many statues of unknown dreemurrs and in the end has Asgore and Toriel) you meet Semi who replaces sans as the judge he is more adept at color magic than sans if you get to fight him. into the throne room you will fight Asriel and get the different endings like normal undertale you fight either Star omega or Chara dreemurr.

Chara

who later decides she has to let the humans out and let them see the light and uses her stolen souls to break the barrier.

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almost finished bloodmoon only a few more paragraphs till its done (main parts at least).
EDIT: I have fallen behind on this and I want to fill gaps in the story but I have run out of energy and ideas.
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 I have to write
truth, forgotten moons, origins, new moon, the forest, blood moon, eclipse, rising sun, finale.
I have started on new moon, the forest, blood moon, rising sun(i think I re-named it though), and on finale.

I have not finished anything yet only started on BloonMoon.

also, I opened an ask thing for my characters 
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Blood Moon

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Blood Moon (update v1)


"Whether you chose to move on and take a chance into the unknown or stay lost in the past thinking of what you could have been LIFE MOVES ON"


It had been 3 years since a group of young wolves Rex,Erik,shy,creme, and others that once were pups with them came out of the forest and stumbled across another pack's territory Blood pack. it was not that long until they were surrounded, the small group put the younger in the center including Erik, Shy, and some new pups ready to fight to the death to protect the younger pups.

"WHAT IS YOUR REASON TO BE HERE" a loud but a female like voice echoed through the circle then a female wolf the alpha emerged out of the ring of red stained wolves she was a golden colored wolf with brown eyes she was surprisingly tall. Erik noticed she had a mark on her left paw she also seemed to notice this too on him she said something to one of them and they slowly unchained the ring so did the small band of lost wolves "who are you wolves" said the alpha of blood pack she replied on her question with "I will let you live if you join our warriors and fight for us".

-2 years-


Rex now the beta of the pack was on a journey with the alpha and the Blood hounds when they were attacked the alpha ordered Rex to run even though he refused to he wanted to stay and fight she ordered him one last time so he did what she wanted he ran back and told the story it was 10 days until they found her dead. Rex now alpha became one of the strongest alphas beside Wolf who combined Ice and blood Rex was never scared "no mercy" the new members of Blood hounds spoke in battle.

-1 year-

Rex and creme now expecting young Erik retired his job to help his brother and his mate with raising the young the night he was reminded of his past." Sometimes the right path is not the easiest one"

It was not long till Erik woke up to screaming and yelling he got up and looked around everything was stained red the pups all dead "Erik come were in a chase!" Yelled Rex so Erik entered the chase "where is creme?" Asked Erik "I know no creme " growled Rex.

-2 weeks-

It has been two weeks they finally caught up with her she had picked off all of the Bloodhounds Erik and his brother Rex entered a cave - she was overlooking a cliff laughing "WHY!" Yelled Rex " It caught me" "I'M SICK" replied creme now blood fur "DIE!" Screamed Rex as he gave a leap- she jumped up and caught his neck and slammed Rex to the ground Erik fell to the floor tears hitting rock the tears turned to flame as she pushed Rex off the cliff to his watery grave "y-y-you dirty killer no you dirty murderer no you-you FAMILY KILLER!"yelled Erik

"SO DIE BITCH" screamed Erik as he pounced on her ... Creme struggled to manage to slash as the left side of her attacker's face ... " h-he wished y- you would kill me" creme softly said, " I'm a monster" she said "bye creme" replied Erik . Erik bit her neck and snapped it while she smiled "s.ee … y..o.u on the .other…..s..i..de" creme softly replied for the last time Erik now slowly walked back to his pack.


A couple of weeks after the event The new Alpha of Blood pack approached his land on that night Wolf's Comet flew over head glowing a beautiful orange gold across the land.


"Take these wings I give you

And learn how to fly.

Long ago I did the same,

Now it's for you to try

Brother." (Erik Taylor-blood moon series)


it was a warm evening Erik leading his troops the bloodhounds on a peacekeeping mission to ice pack though the way there was through his old home he walked down the almost empty of dried stains and skeletons. He walked out leading the group. As they reached the top of the hill they saw another group with one carrying the symbol of the alpha she looked like someone he once knew but the memory was too blurry to remember

'hello I'm Erik alpha of blood pack who are you" said Erik "just call me sapph" replied the other alpha "i come to speak about a common enemy" Said Erik.

(- talk -) (- the time in between -)





Erik walked down the field of copper grass to a cliff he stood proudly over it, Erik looked at the horizon at a pair of mountain's with a setting sun above the Smooth ground giving it an orange tinge near by the mountain's a huge dust storm crawled over the distant horizon ,Erik looked down at the dark blood red stone beneath him the ground corrupted by the powerful Dark pack he looked at the chipped land with strong and spiky ridges below he was angry almost all of his family killed by them ,Erik was determined to finish everyone's pain ,Erik moved down the grassy ridge he moved down along the Orange sunset with his friends not far behind leading blood and Ice pack's army, Erik walked by red and black mounds he stopped

and took a glance at the cave opening the monstrous mouth could swallow a wolf 200x his size he entered through the opening listening to the wind hitting the walls sounding like a heartbeat--


he emerged out of the fog like smoke and entered a room of red and orange walls and straight in the center was James The dark alpha-


Erik entered the circle of red around him

"So you do want to fight," James said slightly laughing under his breath Erik stood his ground and growled quietly

James and Erik held something familiar

They both held the same attacks the same knowledge ,strength, and genetics "so you are scared" James said taunting Erik "no are you im just ready for an attack" stated Erik .

James lunged towards Erik, Erik rolled on to his back and kicked the attacker back and ran at him

James rolled to the side Erik sliding to a halt they started to circle each other James jumped on to Erik collapsing him to the ground "I will not hesitate to end you" stated James "so why not now?" Erik struggled to say "I-I- I CAN'T MOVE!" yelled James seven small gold orbs appeared then a big flaming orb ,James rolled out of the way but was to late he was stuck "y-you would not kill your own father r-right?" Said James

"Only under certain circumstances AND THIS IS ONE OF THEM"

said Erik as he bit James throat throwing him to the ground then started dragging him out of the cave into the blood red field of stone leading back into the cave creating a small red puddle behind.



-Erik now the victor turned around to see the walls evaporating in front of him leaving a dark world ahead.


"A real man fights to the death"

Erik’s woke up just to stare into a dark consuming void with a faint golden glow it seemed to move around he chased it then it vanished

"H-hello?' said Erik now staring into the void of darkness his own voice replied back to him "hello light how are you?" "g-...good... w-who are you?" said Erik "YOU" it echoed louder as the void became blood red. Now able to see the other he seemed to be burnt since it’s fur was charcoal black and it also seemed decayed and rotten for the world to see his organs he had no eyes just red dots that filled the center of the empty void this in its skull.

"I can't believe you did it you tried to change the cycle," said the charred wolf "w-what cycle?" questioned Erik "You know"

"no I don't" replied Erik "kill your father , become like him,have children, and repeat," said the dark wolf. Erik felt angry his heart a flame  he went to lunge but the dark was already upon him growing darker yet darker Erik felt hopeless but the flame in his heart, his soul would not give up his light slowly cracking the tomb setting him free and killing it the dark faded back to reality to see his friends alive Erik and his mate survived the dark thing is dead.


Erik stood up "what did I miss?" asked Erik I a sarcastic tone "we have spotted an unknown pack headed right at us" replied one of the pack scouts "how close?" asked Erik "just over that hill," said the other scout pointing straight ahead

Erik looked over to his left and looked at the sun set "I think they are waiting for nightfall" said Erik


"Hello," said a medium pitched female voice Erik jumped in surprise "you must be the alpha of that pack right?" asked Erik

"Yes," said the light brown and green eyed female alpha "I am Erik alpha of Blood pack" - "and I am Sapphire alpha of Ice" stated the two alphas

"heh- I am Emerald Alpha of Light Pack"


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